These lines are just to imagine a friend claimed itself a loser and was truly ashamed to show what kind of failure he or she is. Don’t think this is according to poetic standards. Don’t think this will be clearly understood. I’ve read that to write a poem, too complicated ‘vocabs’ are unnecessary. Never thought mine was a deadly old-English bombastic though. Whatsoever, too bad for that friend in this case, still losing life to its last breathe?
Lost in the Best Time
You are lost
You make people grossed
I am away
You have no one to play
I guess you’re still in pray
To halt our hug, stare
Water in the stream flows
This future has no hint to glow
There I imagine hopes grow
At least for you, mellow fellow
You sick of silence
Shade every way on land
Shift all doubts
Free the best pigeons
Fight questions day and night
Suppose I lost from your sight
I told off guys who broke your heart
Yesterday was my personal heartbreak
I made jokes for those bright eyes of yours
Today my eyes glimmered in tears
I promised I won’t let you down
Tomorrow’s dawn my massive disaster
We dreamt to be someone
I wished I am nobody
By years of bad reputation
Sadness is what I do not have to mention
Bitterness is all I must churn
Say I return by the coast
Say you greet me with smile and pose
These surely cost me
Pounds of shame and yards of regret the least
Maya Dealove,
(23rd April 2010, Friday, 12.13 pm)
p/s: psl grammar uhh, pencinta bahasa xyah ssh2 wat mogok lapar lak dpan uma ak.
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